Dan stands next to his mom: "tomorrow is my time!" he exclaims
"I’ll get my own crystal creature, I can’t wait, I think I’ll get Zetrax, since these can keep up with me easily!"
his mom says: "before you go, I’ll tell you how these were born to live. 40000 trillion years ago, before great Zinaria, there were 4000000 big magical crystals, moving on the terrains of the current capital.
but, one day, something amazing happened.
primitive creatures started to play with these crystals, churling them at the other crystals.
they started to shatter into pieces, their magic not dissipating, started to form various crystal monsters.
the primitive creatures attacked them and got killed."
Dan says: "thanks mom, I can’t wait to get myself one and battle against you!"
his mom says: "I don’t train mine, so you have a fair shot for sure, but I’ll warn you, my Zaron is quite aggressive when battling."
her zaron hears the conversation and comes in, go’es into a fighting stance, nd uses green lasso, grabs a cup of coffee, and hands it to her.
she says: "oh, I forgot about it!"
Dan says: "I want it to be tomorrow morning already!"
day later, he couldn’t sleep, when his clock rings, he just yanks himself up, and prepares himself as fast as possible, and rus to the school.
teacher: "ok, that’s your ultimate test! get your partner today!"
a shy girl approaches: "I’ll pick Deron, since they are supposed to be the easiest to handle"
the teacher says: "good choice, but that is the last deron."
the girl says: "oh oh! thanks!"
she gets a magical disk the teacher says: "that’s a cristal disk, just throw it, and your new partner will appear"
she do’es it and says: "deron, show up!"
her companion shows up, doesn’t move
she says: "hey"
then, Dan comes up next:
he says: "any zetraxes stil available?"
teacher says: "well, the only creature we have left is bolbino."
he says: "darn it! I don’t want a slow ass bolbino."
teacher says: "if you really won’t, then there’s an other option…"
Dan says: "darn it! is it a zetrax?"
teacher says: yep, but"
Dan interrupts: "ok, please, give me it"
teacher says:"but"
Dan says: "please"
teacher says: "I want to warn you"
…
she relents and gives him a disk.
he says: ‘thanks!"
as he summons his companion, it just turns red.
he says: "hey! I amyour trainer, my name is Dan"
then it launches breakthrough attack on him, sending him hitting the roof.
he screams: "let’s be friends" as he hits the floor
it tries again, but he disorients it by hugging it.
he says: "I won’t hurt you"
it calms down and turns blue.
part 2 someday.
crystalmon: 01. just the beginning
Comments
3 responses to “crystalmon: 01. just the beginning”
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Good start! write a little more. Pisz dalej, pisz!
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hehehe, part 2 already out
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are you writing a novel?
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